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Well, I have three chapters finished on our new project, The Dream Worker. My partner is happy with my revisions and after brainstorming ideas yesterday, I finally understand how the storyline should go. Still some problems to work out, but they always seem to before I finish a story. Tomorrow, I’ll post that first chapter now I’m happy with it.
I’ll also put together a pdf for the first three chapters and post it on the download page.

I wish I were more than one person so I could work on more than one story! All my projects want attention.

Well, heading for bed now. Good night!

Well, I seem to be fighting off a bout of cellulitis without having to spend a week in the hospital. First time in years. :O

I don’t know if I’ll ever use this particular illness in a story, but I have used my experiences with concussions upon occasion. Thomi, for instance, got the dubious benefit of my worst one. I’ve had them from mild to severe. None were fun.

I’ve fallen out of hay lofts, out of trees, off horses, for some inexplicable reason have passed out while riding my bike as a kid and ridden off a four foot drop into the road . . . in front of a car about to head off into traffic, skating accidents, car accidents, being hit by a car . . . I could go on, but you can see where I’d be declared accident prone by friends and family. In fact, some friends suggested I ought to become a stunt woman. Get paid for my pain . . . Nice thought, but I never took them up on that idea.

I just wanted to write.

But had I done that, just think what I could be writing now! Haha! Moreover, my experiences would have been about more than just accidents and pain. My characters–some one or so of them–would have been a stunt person. Hey, maybe they still will be, who knows. Thomi did her own in the movies and shows she was in. I just don’t really show you that; the story doesn’t need it since it takes place in her home state and town of Kingsdale, RI. She’s had her share of accidents, but I think I top her, no question.

In any case, I’ve used my experiences of every sort in my stories. They lend credibility to the scene. I’ve been there, done that, had it happen kind of thing. I sure do know how it feels! Some things though, like riding off the wall, I have no actual memory of doing. Just remember riding my bike around and around the house, coming around again to the front . . . . and waking up in my mother’s arms with her in frightened tears. I can do that scene though. And there certainly was pain after I woke up!

I’ve had three sons, plus two miscarriages. Lost my parents just hours apart . . .

What gets me through all this pain is my faith and the proverbial adage, “Nothing bad ever happens to a writer.”

Not saying you don’t suffer like others; you just eventually find an outlet for it in a story. Might even prove therapeutic.

So, go ahead, use these sad bad times to advantage. Conflict is the name of the game, right? Change things up a bit. Give your character a limp left over from that moron running her down while she was riding her bike to work, the park, or the store. Was to work for me . . . don’t have a limp though. But the site of the break is where that miserable cellulitis first rears it’s ugly head multiple times a year. :\

All kinds of possibilities, wouldn’t you say? And, as I say, it could prove therapeutic.

Yes, it’s been quite some time, I am afraid, since I posted here. So many things to do, so little time! How often do we hear that? Well, on top of that fact are the health issues. I’m just feeling up to getting back to work on all of my sites and my writing projects.

I’ve taken on a new project, again working with another writer–this time, one closer to home

Another novel in the mystery-thriller category. And again, a genre I probably wouldn’t do on my own. Don’t ask me why. Once I get into them, I love it! This one is very different from the last one. I’m more comfortable in doing this one, too. It’s called tentatively, The Dream Worker. I will also be working on some of my own projects as well. particularly A Storm In My Heart. I could probably knock off a story in a month or two, but then I’d have to leave out a lot of side stories, and my goodness, I can’t do that! Yeah, I’m a saga type for sure, looks like!

Don’t forget to look for my two current romances for the Kindle on Amazon. Only .99 cents! Lots of value there when you know you’re getting over 482 pages of story with All For The Love Of Thomi!. The Resurrection Of Joleigh-Anna Kelmann is a more modest under 300 page story. I know, with the Kindle, there are no pages. But a long story is still a long story!

I will sign off for now; have to go make supper for the boys . . . yes, that includes hubby too! Two begging Rat terriers to dance around as well . . . Speaking of cooking–I forgot to mention that I also have a recipe book for the Kindle as well. That’s it up there with the novels. It’s also priced at .99 cents and includes some excerpts from Thomi and Stormi’s stories where hot peppers are mentioned. They love a nice meal with heart and heat as much as we do!

Go ahead; check them out. I’ll be right here making supper . . .

I got a new review from a customer who bought All For The Love Of Thomi on Amazon.com for the Kindle. Nice one. (You can read all of the reviews gotten so far on my reviews page. So you’ll know which ones I’m musing about.)

Getting reviews when you’re not a known writer is tough. But, there are some reputable places online who will do them. And some of them will even review your ebook. This is the toughest probably. Everyone wants a real book to touch and hold . . . to spill your coffee on . . . to get paper cuts from . . . to toss into a corner because the story is so exasperating you can’t stand it, but, you know you will finish it because–well, you just have to . . .

Well, someday my books will be in print. I’m working on it, and there will be one less hurdle for me to worry about in getting a review.

Okay, now, say, all hurdles are overcome, and your book/ebook has been accepted someplace for a review. You wait for days, weeks, months, depending on where you sent it, for the verdict. You are so hopeful of a great review. Words of shining praise that will recommend your work to the whole world so people will want to read your stuff and you can pay the mortgage with your writing.

Then . . . you get the notification of the official verdict.

3 stars or hearts or coffeecups or roses or . . . whatever . . .

The review itself is pretty good, maybe even great, but–the rating is not what you hoped for.

How would you feel? If you are an author, and have gotten a review like this, how did you feel? Were you fairly satisfied? You had to have wondered, though, if the reviewer seemed to like your story, why only an average rating.

I sure did.

So, when I got the review from CoffeeTime, I emailed Kimber to ask what was repetitious about the book. I was surprised to read that she felt that Thomi’s faults were tossed up at her more often than she felt was needful. Made her want to skip over those parts.

Which makes me feel she must have skipped over all of the parts of the story where forgiveness takes place . . .

The next review from The Romance Studio earned for me 3 1/2 hearts. A bit better, but not the 4 I was hoping for. I wanted to be able to run to all my forums and groups and family and friends, (and the naysayers from high school days on . . .) waving those cups, hearts, stars, whatever, triumphantly.

Do you do that with 3 stars, cups, hearts, whatever? Will anyone be excited for you? I didn’t do it, so I don’t know.

The review from The Romance Studio showed me where I might have spent some time repairing a character’s flaw, or did a scene differently. And the forgiveness issue came up again. A couple of the secondary characters bad behaviors were pointed out. No forgiveness or understanding for them.

Of course, for one of them, she was dead on with. If you want to know which one that is, you’ll have to read the book. The other, is . . . well . . . a yes, but no type deal.

Again, the review was a good one. Didn’t say the story stunk or anything like that. If you leave out the rating end of it, why, I got reviews I really can be proud of. So what’s the beef again?

Did they really get the point of what I was trying to convey in that story?

How much of it was skipped over, if any?

The same reviewer at The Romance Studio also reviewed The Resurrection of Joleigh-Anna Kelman, a story close to my heart, but I wasn’t expecting it to do better than Thomi. It did.

4 hearts!

I was thrilled, but disappointed still that Thomi was a half heart behind. In any case, these reviews were feathers in my writer’s cap. And I know that I should feel proud of my efforts.

Now that the books are online at Amazon.com, I know I’m opening myself to a whole new level of reviews. Customer reviews. And some readers out there won’t be as kind as Kimber and Maura were. I know. I have another book out there being trashed by many. But then, I have discovered too, that my co author has reviewed other books, and given his honest opinion of them. They have taken his opinions as personal attacks and have had their entire clan come give some really horrible reviews. Trashed me as an author as well, They don’t know a thing about me, and their opinions showed that. Yes, I’m afraid that some of those remarks left for the world to see, do offend me, and I took them as a personal attack, too. Was hard not to.

But, it’s still opinion, isn’t it? And everyone has at least one of those. Should they all be viewed as a personal attack?

No, of course not. And once the first rush of disappointment is past, and the remarks reread a few times, you will know which ones are sincere in their opinion and which are out to trash your reputation earnestly. You can find ways of stating an opinion so it doesn’t cut the heart and guts out of someone. And you can, if you actually read the book you’re reviewing, find one thing, at least, to say good about it.

Which leads me to the newest review I got . . .

This person tells me why she was frustrated with some parts of the story, and how she felt towards some of the characters. Was kinda sorta like the opinions of the other two. Except, then she expands to tell me that by the end of the book, she saw that Thomi’s father wasn’t a jerk or bad guy. He just seemed to be because, well, hey–he’s a father with an exasperating daughter.

And then, she goes on to say it portrayed life within a family group realistically. Plus, unlike the other two, she saw that, yes, Thomi did need a lesson in humiliation more than once. She saw that Thomi does indeed earn forgiveness from almost everyone. And from those she didn’t, well, they don’t count!

This reader got it. By the end of the story, she got it. And because of her specific remarks, I know she actually read the whole 429 pages.

So, I guess this post is twofold. How to take a review of a story that may not be quite what you hoped for, and how to write one that will be useful to others and to the author as well.

So, as a recap:

If the review’s ratings aren’t what you hoped for, what is the tone of the review itself? Pretty good? Then don’t take the ratings too personally, as if you failed as a storyteller. Remember a review is simply one person’s take on your story. As long as it is written to the very best of your ability, has been edited well so there’s not a ton of typos and grammatical errors, you can just see it for what it is. One person’s opinion.

But, if you have just slapped a story together haphazardly with no regard to form, style, format, plot, sentence structure, dialog, and haven’t bothered to edit or have it edited, then, maybe, you should take the criticism to heart, and rework the story to at least near perfection. There is always going to be a typo missed, or some error in grammar that slips by. Forgivable things. But when it is so bad it takes a reader out of the story, then you will lose them as such. And they might just decide to tell the world about it.

Be willing to accept that, and be determined to do better next time.

As for the really trashy reviews . . . I ignore them. I may not be happy about them, but I just ain’t gonna lose my beauty rest over ‘em!

Writing a review:

Write how you feel about the book without ripping the life out of the author. There’s no need for it. Explain your thoughts with sensitivity, courtesy, and honesty. Find one or two things to praise the author for before delving into all the things you weren’t happy with. And don’t go overboard with your dissatisfaction. Remember, someday, you yourself may be on the receiving end of someone’s disappointment. A little tact, a little restraint is always appreciated.

If you love it, great! Tell the author and the world why you did. Specifically. You don’t have to write something about every aspect of the story, or about every character, but one or two things about the story, and maybe the main characters would be so much appreciated. In short, saying, I liked this book, or, I loved this story, is okay, but why did you like/love it? Were the characters believable and were you drawn to them? Were you sad the story had to end? Did a character in the book remind you of someone you know?

The list could go on and on. But I’ll end it there.

And I’ll take my own advice . . .!

I’ve finally jumped onto the Kindle wagon. Thomi and Joleigh are there. Links to them are below. I’m sure I should have done this sooner, but . . . *sheepish shrug* I didn’t.

I’m working on a couple other projects, which is why I haven’t posted in a couple of days or so. Trying to get Stormi finished. Sometimes the creative process doesn’t go quite the way you hope.

But anyway, the books are there for your to enjoy, and are priced lower than normal at the moment. So, if you want to get them at a price under $5, now is the time to go for it!

Here’s the deal on the Kindle. It’s on my wishlist, I can tell you that!

Thomi Joleigh

If you are more into PDF eBooks, then find them here. HTML is also offered, but they are being updated at this moment.

Sample chapters are available as well.

Just a personal note . . .

Today marks 12 years since my dad passed, and tomorrow will be 12 years for my mom. The pain is dull now. But the sadness never leaves even though I know I’ll see them eventually in the new system . . . My mother had multiple health issues, among them, cancer, heart disease, diabetes, stroke, high blood pressure . . . But what carried her off in the end was a blood infection she evidently contracted while in the hospital. This insidious infection kills withing a matter of a couple of weeks.

Sadly, Mom had her first stroke just as she was showing an interest in my work. Something I’d been waiting for all long time. I was looking forward to her feedback on my romances, as she was a huge reader of them. When she died, we had barrels of books to sort through!

I’m working on a personal blog for them and for looking back through the years. Strolling Memory Lane Some of my ideas for stories come from such a stroll. Got lots of paths to go down yet! Plenty of material to use!

Until next time, keep safe and keep reading!

Well, I’ve decided to try to format Thomi for the Kindle. It isn’t an easy process, and if I had the money, I would have it done for me!

Each day, I learn a little bit more, and get closer to being able to upload the book. I have my account created to be able to do that. All other info is set and ready to go. Found a couple of books to help me with this job. I wish they would be here today, but probably won’t be until some time next week. So maybe, I’ll have to just accept the wait, and get other things done in the meantime.

I’m excited by this opportunity like I wasn’t before. Don’t ask me why. I don’t have a good reason really. But, now I’m ready to do this. So much to take into consideration!

Will be nice when they finally are able to allow uploads by PDF. I invested in Adobe Acrobat
9 Professional recently. I don’t care that there are free programs out there. Sometimes you just have to bite the bullet and get what works best. Because, most of the time, you get what you pay for.

Anyway, I’ll post about my Kindle experience as I experience it. Right now, just being able to find an easy way to format Thomi into HTML would be nice. I pretty much feel I could have had her hand coded by now, instead of messing with cleaning up Word code or Mobipocket code.

Hmmm… I could try WordPerfect and the PrintShop Pro Publisher. And MS Publisher. Although, I can’t imagine that wouldn’t have any less bloated coding than Word. But, it’d be a learning experience, wouldn’t it?

When I tried loading Thomi into my CoffeeCup HTML Editor, it took forever to load, and then it was slow to accept my changes. Too big of a file, I’m sure is the reason. Over 400 pages. She’s a big book! So, if I decide to hand code, I’ll have to go chapter by chapter. Thirty three chapters . . .

Yeah, she’s a big book.

Well, I guess I should get on with it!

Until next time, keep safe and keep reading!

And so much warmer! Walking weather!!!

I’ve been tossing some ideas around for Stormi’s life. I usually don’t map out a lot. Just enough to let me see my way a few feet ahead of me, so to speak. But with this story, I’ve actually written the ending . . . or at least a possible ending. Not sure. This story is going to be different from Thomi, in that a bit of violence will be present in it, because of the nature of Dean Van Kirk, Stormi’s rotten ex husband. And some other surprises I didn’t know about until I began writing the story.

As I have mentioned, I like putting in a lot of family in my stories. Thomi’s is the biggest, and the basis for all of my novels, so they will be featured in my series. I’ll continue to slip in plants about various ones, which will set the stage for the next book or books, depending on where my story takes me.

Got some stuff to do offline today. Sigh . . . I just want to get to it!! But I will shortly, I promise! Have to look for some themes for a couple other blogs I want to do as well.

Always something to do!

Till later!

Hi! How’s your weekend going?

Mine’s not too bad. Nice sunny day, not to cold . . .

Decided to go ahead and add the Creating the story pages. Don’t have one for Stormi yet, but then, her story is still in the works.

So, for the most part, the pages are up. I’m happy with the theme, and I’ve made the commitment to post. I want to be in the position of hosting book tours in the future. Hopefully the not too distant future.

This will be a short post. I want to write today, and I have a few other sites to update.

Have a great day! See you tomorrow!!

I’ve got most of the pages up and live now. Just need to get a couple of other images in, and edit decide if I want to do a Creating the Story kind of thing. I have them, actually, which were up on the original site. So, maybe I will edit them and get them up as well.

Working on getting some BUY buttons up. Making sure PayLoadz works properly. Yes, you’ll instantly get a link to your book upon completion of your payment. If you’d rather a CD, your choice will be mailed to you within a day or two of your completed payment. I’ll be prompt in mailing but Life happens and sometimes gets in the way of the best intentions.

When I have print books ready, I will post that news right here and from the rrrrrrooof tops!!!

Okay, I have to hit the hay . . . Night!

This post is going to be short. I’m starting to fall asleep.